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this is like a 2005 newgrounds cartoon, shitty sound effects / animation and all. lol.

threebrain responds:

Well, as long as you lol :-)

You're very good at animating! I won't lie though, the drawings are kinda bad, except the raccoon near the end. But yeah man ur awesome at animation!

artistunknown responds:

A lot of the drawings here were rushed, I can definitely do better, but most of the time I just try to get things done as fast as possible while still having smooth animation, and that usually requires drawing things worse :p

I've been meaning to take more time though, and I really should.

Thanks!

haha this is cool. I dont get what happend at the end thoguh. The pyramid killed himself? or was that cop who got killed already in there.. why did it show a dead cop even though there wasnt a cop there earlier

Sugarbrain responds:

The two cops found another cop dead, it was apparently killed by Jeff the sphinx. There was a cop in Jeff's apartment earlier and he found it. But the cops thinks that frank actually killed the another cop.

is that footage of the weis shooting by randy stair at the end?

TheMultiMechs responds:

um no, its an earthquake, read the description

heyyy buddyy... take down my review cause i gave it no stars? well sport, here is 5 whole stars :) ( i really voted 0 for the real vote though)

lmao maybe thats why theres only 5 star reviews here, casue you deleted any criticism lol.

ill jjust leave the most important part of the deleted reviews:

think about ur cartoon, and go ask some adults, or actually ask a few different age groups, and see what they like and say about it. im very serious when i say you will want to take this down later on in life. unless ur retarded

FlowJoe responds:

https://youtu.be/oP9Ag5aoE6I
Anyways, I can't even delete reviews on Newgrounds. I like constructive criticism, I always want to keep improving my stuff! That's all I have to say. Have a nice day, buddyy!

"This is good" i said as the sniffer

Urbs responds:

hey is that my shirt?

I just realized YOUR name is tyler, and you created this, so it's a triple meta joke! The etch a sketch line was fucking funny too. Only thing i don't like is the stick figure-esque characters

TylerLandis responds:

Thanks man! This series is going to keep going in a pretty meta direction haha. I have the next 2 written, and I'm really excited about them! And yeah, I think a lot of Newgrounders aren't big fans of the animation style, but I think minimalism suits the series well, so I'll sticking with it haha. I'll be revamping the animation a little for the next episode, but the character designs are still going to be the simplistic "stick figure" style. Don Hertzfeldt was a big influence on the visual style of the series, and I think it's fun! :)

i like the art, except for the tweening, and the story was super generic and predictable, the consipracy theorist joke is overused, I liked the asian joke.

Derp-dee-derp responds:

Sorrdy, I have no uh...professiono twaining.

cartmans mouth looks slightly out of place, like it should be lower or something

storytellerYT responds:

yeah, I realized that but I didn't think it was that noticeable.

the only good part of this is the graffiti, i hope it wasn;t stolen. The art is horrible, but theres actually a decent amount of animation in this and i am glad you tried, it isn't alot though, and it isn't very good. I had no idea what was happening though. I hate how when the person walked at0:38 his body wasn't changing.

HayVideos responds:

Thank you for response and no the stuff was not stolen. This was my first animation so I will take anything to help me get better.

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