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i like some of the art

the only good part of this is the graffiti, i hope it wasn;t stolen. The art is horrible, but theres actually a decent amount of animation in this and i am glad you tried, it isn't alot though, and it isn't very good. I had no idea what was happening though. I hate how when the person walked at0:38 his body wasn't changing.

HayVideos responds:

Thank you for response and no the stuff was not stolen. This was my first animation so I will take anything to help me get better.

I think your voice is bad! But you should use that to your advantage! make it funnily bad! Like i enjoyed the pranksters voice, it was pretty funny. The concept wasn't very entertaining or interesting though. and the cartoon is meh. I do not like that it wasn't entirely colored.

Stoicomics responds:

Thank you for your constructive criticism, really appreciated.

Finish it!

relatable and funny but the art is trash!

I-I don't know what to say man....
When he fell he shouldve fell all the way down, faster. I wish KD wouldve been voice acted. it wouldve been funny if when he came to the screen he made a scary ass spider face and shot web or something.

XxFalopioxX responds:

indeed. i know maybe he should fell more faster. and i just did this fast but yes i know the voice would be better. i actually do the lips sync on durant. but not did the voice acting because i dont have a good mic. i just use my iphone but i really dont like the sound. i dont know if there is a APP to have a better voice on mic and mp3 format. thanks anyway, i would be improving and updating my mic and try to do my best.

this is a pretty sad story. Not sad as in embarrassing but like sad as in i legit feel bad. But I hope people don't rate this a high number because of it. I appreciate you trying to do sop motion but everything is really slow and choppy here. it isn't very good. Good try though. I hope you enjoy BCA

Kosky96 responds:

Yeah I know, but the reason I made was not only because it was part of my final project at college, but also as a reminder of "This is me, this is who I am as a person, I'm still here." I can understand why you hope that it doesn't get high ratings, I'm not really about ratings tbh. I guess because its my first actual attempt at animating, in hindsight it does look sloppy, I will improve for next time.Thank you anyway! :) & I did enjoy BCA thank you!

I love cyanide and happiness!

dafanimator responds:

i love them too
leeeeeeeeettt's be friends :D

did i see a black timmy

there was too much tweening when it didn't have to be tweened. I know some parts needed tweening like the skydiving part but thats really it. When he points theres poopoo on the floor his pointing arm looks bad. I liked the loading screen gimmick at the beginning, though it was too long. I don't know anything about proportions so I can't really see anything wrong with that....
The backgrounds are nice, especially considering they were done in flash. Oney's hands and arms look very odd at most parts, most notably the 3rd loading screen and at 1:58 when he says simeon for the 2nd time.

I guess I could say I also like the creativity with this because most of the bits you chose we're just oney making random noises and not very specific things, though maybe you could make a better cartoon by choosing good parts of the oneyplays

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